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The Perfect Family

January 5, 2024

True Crime-like
Paid

Everyone in the neighborhood envied the Richardsons. Perfect house, perfect jobs, perfect children. I was their nanny for three years before I discovered what happened to the children who weren't perfect enough.

The Richardsons hired me fresh out of college. The position offered excellent pay, a private suite above their three-car garage, and the opportunity to care for their twin six-year-olds, Emma and Ethan. Dr. Richardson was a renowned pediatric surgeon, and Mrs. Richardson ran a successful interior design firm. They were the epitome of upper-middle-class success—charitable, well-respected, and unfailingly polite.

The children were eerily well-behaved. They never argued, never threw tantrums, never disobeyed. They excelled in school, played multiple instruments, and participated in competitive sports. Their rooms were immaculate, their schedules meticulously organized.

At first, I attributed their exceptional behavior to good parenting. But as months passed, I noticed unsettling patterns. The children never spoke unless spoken to when their parents were present. They performed their daily routines with mechanical precision. And sometimes, I would catch them staring at nothing, their expressions blank, as if they had momentarily shut down.

The basement was strictly off-limits. "Dr. Richardson's home office," Mrs. Richardson explained. "He needs absolute privacy for his research." The door was always locked, the small window covered from the inside.

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One evening, while the Richardsons attended a charity gala, I heard a sound from the basement—a faint, rhythmic tapping. Curious, I tried the door. To my surprise, it was unlocked.

The basement was immaculately organized, with sterile white walls and bright fluorescent lighting. One half contained a typical home office—desk, computer, filing cabinets. The other half was separated by a glass partition, behind which stood what appeared to be hospital equipment: a bed with restraints, monitoring devices, and an array of pharmaceutical supplies.

On a shelf above the desk sat five identical framed photographs of Emma and Ethan at different ages, from infancy to their current age. Except in each photo, the children looked subtly different—slightly varying facial features, different eye colors, different smiles.

The filing cabinet was unlocked. Inside, I found folders labeled "E&E 1" through "E&E 4," and a current folder labeled "E&E 5." Each contained detailed medical records, developmental assessments, and behavioral notes. The most recent folder included a section titled "Improvements from Previous Iterations."

As I processed what I was seeing, I heard the garage door open upstairs. I quickly replaced the files and hurried back up, locking the basement door behind me.

That night, I couldn't sleep. The implications were too horrifying to contemplate. Yet I needed to know more.

Over the next few weeks, I paid closer attention to the children. I noticed small scars behind their ears, partially hidden by their hair. When they thought no one was watching, they would sometimes touch these scars in unison, as if responding to some unseen signal.

I began researching Dr. Richardson's published work. His specialty was neural development in children, with a focus on behavioral modification. His most recent papers discussed theoretical applications of embedded neural interfaces—technology that could potentially control or modify behavior through direct brain stimulation.

Three months after discovering the basement, I noticed Emma developing what Mrs. Richardson called "problematic behaviors." She began asking questions, showing curiosity about things outside her prescribed activities. She wanted to change her hairstyle, requested different foods, expressed interest in different music.

Mrs. Richardson scheduled more "check-ups" with Dr. Richardson. Emma would disappear into the basement for hours, returning subdued and compliant. But the behaviors would return, stronger each time.

One night, I overheard the Richardsons arguing.

"The modifications aren't holding," Dr. Richardson said. "The autonomy subroutines are overriding the control parameters."

"Then start over," Mrs. Richardson replied coldly. "We still have the templates."

"It's not that simple. Each iteration develops resistance more quickly. E&E 6 might not be stable at all."

"We can't just discard her. Questions would be asked."

"We've handled it before. A tragic accident. A period of mourning. Then the introduction of a cousin coming to live with us after losing their parents."

I packed my bags that night and left a resignation letter. I considered going to the police, but what would I say? That I suspected the Richardsons of replacing their children with more compliant versions? That they were experimenting with neural control? I had no proof, only suspicions and glimpses of things I didn't fully understand.

Two weeks later, the local news reported a tragic accident. Emma Richardson had fallen down the basement stairs and suffered fatal head injuries. The community rallied around the grieving family.

Three months after that, the Richardsons introduced a niece who had come to live with them—a quiet, well-behaved girl named Emily who looked remarkably like Emma, except for her perfect, unwavering smile.

I moved across the country, changed my name, and tried to forget. But sometimes I still dream of those children with the scars behind their ears, and I wonder how many iterations came before them, and how many will come after.

Story Information

Word Count: 831
Character Count: 4689
Price: $42.00

Commission ID: macabre-tomb-devours-frosty-journal-phantasmal

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